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Death Comes To Talk To Me by ~littlemaggie:iconlittlemaggie:



He licks his fingers
And turns the page;
His eyebrows twitch,
They twist in rage



He slams the newspaper -
Smashes it to the floor;
He stands up madly
And runs for the door!



He yanks on his boots -
Hat and staff equipped,
He emerges smelling of Death
Ascending from the crypt



He makes his way to me
His beard a twisted flame
Of golden and red braids;
Like a wizard from a game



He licks his lips,
He thinks some more,
Then starts speaking,
Recalling all the gore,


" The car will be a Chevy,
It will hit you from behind,
It will kill you on impact
And leave the passenger blind,



Noon-day tomorrow,
Tomorrow's newspaper said,
Better avoid the highway,
Better stay in bed,"



He turned away from me,
Leaving me with the surprise
Of having witnessed the death
Of myself before my eyes!



He walks away quite grandly,
Tipping his hat to passerby,
But not to all of them,
Just those that will soon die.
©2003-2009 ~littlemaggie
:iconlittlemaggie:

Author's Comments

Just a poem about Death - what if some people's premonitions about something bad that might happen might actually be true? What if it really is Death giving you a bit of friendly advice?

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:iconmichi-or-mojo:
Entertaining. Really. Very neat. And I'm one who rarely gives out compliments without a catch. I even wrote a poem about it. ;p

Truly enjoyable.
:icongiyvin:
chilling, eyt teastie. I enjoy the flow mostly along with the imatry due to a fast pace reading due to the short lines.. nicly played out, cheers

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:iconmadnifesto:
Whoa scary. I love it.

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My inner turbulence has finally found a way to mess up my life.. Not Just My Head!!
:iconvollmond:
That was just amazing, I don't know much about poetry, but I surely love this one! Simple and strong, nice rythme, clever lines, very vivid images. Congratulations!
:icongiyvin:
... this is a very interesting piece though it hadden't ended as I had hoped... .. .

"As I lifted the paper Up
Turned the page to my surpize
"Girl's Life Ended by the Blind"
Then I realized it was already time"

.. kinda somehtign as if even though she was told.. show that death is unavoidable...

none hte less this poem struck a chord within me so it shall become one of my fav's

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TheDistructive[Angelic]Feel | [dA Spirit]deviantARTasYouLikeIt
:icongiyvin:
PS
I realize I broke your seven beat line wiht the ending I had in mind

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TheDistructive[Angelic]Feel | [dA Spirit]deviantARTasYouLikeIt
:iconneldoreth:
I really like that. Death seems to me like a nicer fellow now. :D...Anyway i liked it. =)
:iconloki-master-of-all:
Really nice I'm not one for poetry but this is cool,

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